Write stories that are remarkable, fascinating, and powerful

When people ask me how they can improve their marketing copy, I tell them to write stories that are remarkable, fascinating, and powerful. Start with your own story, I say, about how you helped your client, why you started your company, and when it became obvious that the services you provide help people in profound ways.

In other words, start writing, and sharing, your stories.

Stories arouse emotion

Stories arouse people’s emotions, grab their attention, and move people to action. All very useful activities when you are trying to get your target audience’s to listen to you.

Besides that, stories are so much more interesting than a series of facts, or a bullet list of statistics. Yes, data supports your story, but it should BE your story, written as a narrative and not read like a statistical analysis.

Your story contains the emotion behind what you do along with the who, when, where, why, how, and so what?

A sample story

A few years ago, my sign shop, Signarama Vermont, offered free and steeply discounted signage to non-profits who applied for them. We called it Grants for Success, and on one particular year, we received an application from a local nonprofit that serves children with cancer. It’s a year-round program that offers a respite from the day-to-day worries and medical treatments the kids receive as cancer patients, and returns them their childhoods even if for just one week. Over the summer months, they host week-long camps, bringing in kids from all over.

Pretty amazing organization, right? In addition to providing us the statistics that showed how much they supported their clients, the marketing director made certain we knew that they lacked facilities signage. In other words, they didn’t even have a main sign by the entrance to let the kids and their families know they had arrived. Were signs important to them? They thought so, and explained why in their application.

Signs, they said, are a welcoming gesture, and their clientele deserved a warm, happy greeting to start their camp experience.

Because of their story, this nonprofit received a package of signage—free-standing and building signs—for FREE. Not because the other nonprofits didn’t deserve free signage, too (and we only provided 100% discounted sign packages to two nonprofits each year), but because of the strength of their story. It moved me and my staff to tears.

What their story did was tell us the who (the campers), what (they provide them an experience where fun is the center of their day, not their disease), when (as soon as they arrive at camp), where (the camp’s physical facilities, which would benefit greatly with the addition of signs that include the nonprofit’s logo and colors), why (because fun and camaraderie is important for healing), how (through lots of great programming and a very well trained staff), and so what (because camps like this are needed for kids with cancer and this program does such a wonderful job that their campers return as often as they can).

This story was compelling to read.

Some last thoughts on telling your story

You can write stories that are funny, tragic, self-explanatory, educational, and client-oriented. Always make them relevant to your clients, no matter what angle you write from or story that you tell.

Tell your best stories and in them, weave the points you want to make. Draw parallels between two stories that seem unrelated upon first glance, but offer a deeper meaning when analyzed by you. Stories do a wonderful job of showing people what something means, rather than telling them, which often sounds shallow and self-serving. A demonstration is so much more effective.

Final wrap up

Stories are fascinating and easy to tell. If it sounds difficult to think them up, stop. Think about your business life and what has happened recently. Think about client interactions, and ask yourself, how have you helped your clients, how you solved their problems. That’s why you even have clients—you solved their problems. Now write down the answers to these questions, and there are your stories. They are most definitely blog posts you can use, articles for LinkedIn, and social media posts.

Keep a running list of stories and insights for future use. Pretty soon, you’ll be a consistent storyteller and your readership and traffic to your website will increase. Find the remarkable, fascinating, and powerful stories in your business. They are your everyday successes and those you provide your clients.

And remember, my friend, success is found through storytelling.